first mid-yr

English paper 1, composition.
I do section 2 first instead of section 1 because it is more easy. Our class had done many letter writing before and that got helping points thus it is quite simple(my meaning of simple means can do but cannot score high). But what is different about this question was like a combination of both formal letter and a proposal, but I still manage to do it.
Section 1, I choose a narrative story about time management, well-planned but not enough time to write more, I miss out a lot of points that I wrote when I was planning.
Both I is quite simple, can be done, but here the problem, I cannot write well due to my limited vocabs and gramme and sentence structure, my current standard is only about primary school.
Sad ar, must improve on my writing by reading more, expect books.